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bgryan
Junior Member
since 2003-06-16
Posts 30
North Ireland

0 posted 2003-08-05 05:01 PM


Profound words heard in vain
war and peace it's just a game
as man explores outer space,
the human race dies in disgrace!

Profits made,battles won
by another form of gun
what is yours,I'll have as well
or I'll see you in hell!

Handshakes in a conference room
agreement made,already doomed!

Talk of trade and prosperity
disarmament,you could have fooled me!
make a wish and make it clear
it's the last you'll ever hear!



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SharaRose
Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
1 posted 2003-08-05 06:42 PM


The loss hurts, and especially to see it on tv. Lets hope this all ends soon. The madness of it all.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Mad_Hatter
Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393
Canada
2 posted 2003-08-05 06:47 PM


This "thing" which you hope ends will never end, it is the way of humans, we have fought wars for as long as we have been on this earth...sadly some things will never change.  Very thoughtful poem, I liked it.
Lexy
Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California
3 posted 2003-08-05 11:25 PM


this was very good. the ryhme was nice. good topic, I could feel the emotion.

moshpit
Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 143
cebu, philippines
4 posted 2003-08-06 06:02 AM


for some reason this reminds me of a trent reznor song..

it'a a really good piece..

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