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green_itchy_stuff
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0 posted 2003-08-05 01:34 PM



I know it doesn't hurt
Immoral instant clash
Touch and breathe our sin

Staggering fear induced
Confession niave and truce
Pulpit evil slayer
Guilt and heaven use


God inside his head
Wrong what Satan lead

Chastity unreal
Conscience underight
"I know its wrong"

Grasp restraint and hush
Nightmares from purest scarrs
Dirt for Hell in forfeit
Broadcast mass embarassment
Self destruct in suicide


The lamb breeding death
Was the Vatican's very breath

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Im just trying something new.  Let me know if this is good or if it sux.

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

© Copyright 2003 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
eor
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1 posted 2003-08-05 02:27 PM


personally i think this iis a great write! not necessarly my favorite subject matter, but that has nothing to do with it,.. anyways, i thought it was a fantastic write! very goood job!

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

green_itchy_stuff
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2 posted 2003-08-05 05:19 PM


Thanx eor.  
Im not a devil worshiper or anything.  I just figured what could be darker than talking about the horrible actions of religious leaders and then knowing its not just cretive thinking but true.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

Mad_Hatter
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3 posted 2003-08-05 06:51 PM


I enjoyed this and I am very much an atheist.  In my opinion to worship "god", is the same thing as worshiping the "devil".  If god truly does exist (which i'm sure he doesn't), then he made evil therefore he and satan are one and the same, or perhaps because god invented evil...he is the more evil of the two.  Good write.
eor
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4 posted 2003-08-05 07:14 PM


i did not think it was devil worshping at all i meant the religion part, not big on fan...

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

green_itchy_stuff
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5 posted 2003-08-05 07:51 PM


Mad- I do believe in god and the devil.  I believe the relationship he has to all existing spirits is that of a leader rather than dominator.  Yeah he created people and spirits but he does not make their decisions for them.  That is the one thing that sets people apart from other creatures, the ability to choose.  

I feel like a giant contradiction.  I write some pretty dark stuff and still believe in god.  I guess Im just cynical.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

green_itchy_stuff
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6 posted 2003-08-05 07:52 PM


i gotcha eor

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

Lexy
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7 posted 2003-08-05 11:16 PM


Yeah, I agree very much with your view. I liked this piece...its different and interesting. Good job.
Lex

green_itchy_stuff
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8 posted 2003-08-06 03:33 AM


thanx Lexy

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

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