Dark Poetry #3 |
When I Died |
Lexia Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 111Nowhere |
*I've been having a really depressing day so I've been writing all day. This probably sounds like crap but oh well, maybe someone will understand it.* When I cried, You waited. When I screamed, You left. When I grieved, You hurt. When I died, You loved. [This message has been edited by Lexia (08-04-2003 11:28 PM).] |
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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas |
Makes perfect sence to me Good write A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness. |
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Lexia Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 111Nowhere |
Thanks Dark Kisses. I didn't even know what I was writing when I wrote this. Someone just said that it was good. |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
i understand this perfectly...good write i liked it, short but to the point, (i am adding this to my library) "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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Lexia Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 111Nowhere |
Thank you eor. |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
far from crap. Very meaningful. wow, its a shame pain has to bring out your talent. |
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Lexia Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 111Nowhere |
Thank you many times, Lexy. You may only be one person to the world, but you may also be the world to one person. |
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