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GeorgiaPaver
Junior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 15
Savannah, GA

0 posted 2003-08-04 12:23 PM

This is a poem I wrote about my girlfriend wanting to give my baby up for adoption.

I sit here at night
Crying myself to sleep
Remembering it is you
That she doesn't want to keep

I sit here at night
Dreaming that down your face
Little tears are running
That with my fingers, I erase

I sit here at night
Feeling you kick mommy with your feet
You never knowing
It is you I wish to meet

I will fight for you
Because you will know just how much
My life longs
For you to give me one little touch

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-08-04 01:00 AM

It is understandable to want to be a mother,
even if it's not inside of you..

It is also understandable,
if you choose to take that which you yearn for
as your own

Great write, doll.

Dark Kisses
Member

since 2001-06-24

Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas

2 posted 2003-08-04 01:18 AM

Very emotional write. loved it!!

A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness.

GeorgiaPaver
Junior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 15
Savannah, GA

3 posted 2003-08-04 02:40 AM

I don't want to be a mother, im a father ^-^! its ok. My girlfriend wants to give our child up and I dont. I plan to fight her for custody. I'm 17 years old,She just doesn't think she can be a mother. Well I'm not ready to be a father, but in order for us to make the baby, we had to put ourselves in the shoes of an adult...

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

4 posted 2003-08-04 12:29 PM

This will be worth fighting for, you go with what your heart tells you.

It seems, you have so much love and optimism, and a mature enough mind to think about the responsibility.

Love, hugs and hope coming your way...

such an emotional, compassionate write, thanks for sharing.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

5 posted 2003-08-04 07:28 PM

powerful...truly powerful

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

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