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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-08-04 12:10 PM



For the years

I've made a
prize
of my heart.

Hush these
winds, see
the aura of
the storm.

Somewhere along
the way, I
lost my place.

So I just
started all over again.

© Copyright 2003 Meghan Armitage - All Rights Reserved
gemjop
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1 posted 2003-08-04 08:48 AM


You, are taking up sooooo much space in my library! but, i don't mind.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Susan Caldwell
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2 posted 2003-08-04 09:42 AM


Yep me to...always starting over...hopefully something is learned everytime...

Susan C.

eor
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blues & greys
3 posted 2003-08-04 07:27 PM


ahhh a clean slate, but is it ever really clean...nice write

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

Lexy
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4 posted 2003-08-04 08:50 PM


Theres something freshly beautiful to this. See the aura of the storm, I love that line.

22NICK22
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5 posted 2003-08-09 11:20 AM


great...
blackhalo
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6 posted 2003-08-09 11:58 PM


Too much to say in one post, just, great.  
green_itchy_stuff
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New Caney, Tx
7 posted 2003-08-10 12:59 PM


I thought it was cool too.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

SharaRose
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8 posted 2003-08-10 02:47 PM


It's a good thing to finally come to a resolve.
SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
9 posted 2003-08-10 03:29 PM


starting over sounds like a plan..
bsquirrel
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10 posted 2003-08-26 12:11 PM


Powerful statements, all, though I will admit I'm having trouble finding the connection between stanzas. Still ... love your words.
Third Libra
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11 posted 2003-08-26 06:48 PM


You know I never get much time or chances to come into this site, but whenever I do I always try to read your stuff. Great poem.

Love is only an excuse to hurt and to get hurt... Knowledge brings ye fear.

littlewing
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12 posted 2003-08-26 08:03 PM


Meg:

good for you

Somewhere along
the way, I
lost my place.

So I just
started all over again.


and again and again and again . . .
nice write
xxoo

Tequilia_Sunrise
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13 posted 2003-08-26 11:36 PM


I'm young but i fell like i have done this to much. great write

THANK-YOU

Tequilia

inkedgoddess
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14 posted 2003-08-27 11:08 PM


never stop starting, then its all over........

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