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Mad_Hatter
Member

since 2003-06-29

Posts 393
Canada

0 posted 2003-08-03 08:54 PM

It’s hard to explain the way we are
Maybe I just miss the way we were
I doesn’t matter once it’s gone
But it all comes back, some days
The ghost in the attic of my mind
Is telling me that I love you
That I need you in a different way
But nothing’s going to change
This room is swarming with all my thoughts
I just want to hide here forever
A thousand violinists
Playing a thousand different songs
I find my peace in shattered glass
I found my reason amongst the bloody ash
I write my life, into this screen
Reason through the keys
Everything you mean to me
Maybe it’s the end when this is all that’s left
Maybe this malady is my forever

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

1 posted 2003-08-03 09:15 PM

"i write my life into this screen"

fantastic

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

Mad_Hatter
Member

since 2003-06-29

Posts 393
Canada

2 posted 2003-08-03 10:31 PM

Thanks for your reply Eor. It means alot coming from you. Your poems are just so true to emotion and just wonderful, thanks again.

Dark Kisses
Member

since 2001-06-24

Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas

3 posted 2003-08-03 11:38 PM

this was wonderful

GeorgiaPaver
Junior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 15
Savannah, GA

4 posted 2003-08-04 12:30 PM

This is a great poem. One of those ones you can relate to.

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

5 posted 2003-08-04 08:48 PM

beautiful, not your best in my opinion, but I liked it none the less. There are some great images in here. Nice piece.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

6 posted 2003-08-05 08:01 PM

Actually this is the best piece I think Ive read by you. I guess it might be because I can relate to it thicker than stone at times.

Nice write.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

7 posted 2003-08-05 08:02 PM

Except mine would be an inner battle with myself more than anything.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

8 posted 2003-08-05 10:22 PM

Sometimes memories haunt...maybe they are to remind us of the mistakes we make, and not to repeat them? :?

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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