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Dark Poetry #3

Broken-hearted-Tears

jaysh
Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 133
IL, USA

0 posted 2003-08-03 05:00 PM

** Note: Usually I dont write whiney breakup poems, but this just came to my head.

Lost tears on soft blankets,
Mascara running down her face,
Her green/hazel/brown eyes are swollen and red,
Such a beautiful face turned ugly,
By brokenhearted tears.
Her unwashed hair, thrown up messy, but falling,
like she did for the guy, that shattered her heart,
Pajamas consist of a large t-shirt,
Hanging loosely around her waist,
As strong arms of another once had,
Moist lips from salty tears,
Running down her face,
Tears he kissed away, the many times he hurt her,
And now, alone she lies,
With her brokenhearted tears,
Alone in a bed,
Wondering...
"Will I ever get up?"

By:Janna Shaffer
Age: 15

[This message has been edited by jaysh (08-03-2003 11:50 PM).]

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

1 posted 2003-08-03 08:34 PM

ahh the agony of breakup, some might say defeat, nice write...

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

jaysh
Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 133
IL, USA

2 posted 2003-08-04 12:51 PM

thank you eor

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

3 posted 2003-08-04 08:54 PM

hmmm..this is good. I enjoyed it. It was very descriptive.

jaysh
Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 133
IL, USA

4 posted 2003-08-06 12:55 PM

thanks

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