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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2003-08-03 03:50 PM



It seems clear at first
Blured vision
Foggy
Light headed

It gets to that point where everything goes numb
A little house in the midst of a giant city
Population close to bust

And yet there is no one to be seen
Even a whisper seems to echo
And yet they're everywhere

A dark closet holds the biggest secrets
Secrets revealed when one looks
And remain secrets just the same

Capture the flag and soar like an eagle
Near extinct
It doesnt take much
Dropped and gone forever

Outrageous it is.
In the eye of the beholder
A void in the reality of consciousness

A quite life
Credited by stone
Buried
Forever unknown

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

© Copyright 2003 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
eor
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since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
1 posted 2003-08-03 08:31 PM


"A dark closet holds the biggest secrets
Secrets revealed when one looks
And remain secrets just the same"

keep the free verse comming greeny...loved this one, you just keep getting better and better! (adding this to library)

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

Mad_Hatter
Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393
Canada
2 posted 2003-08-03 08:45 PM


Great write, very imagineative.  Keep it up.
green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
3 posted 2003-08-03 10:04 PM


Thanx guys.  

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

Annie
Junior Member
since 2003-07-23
Posts 42
Seattle, WA
4 posted 2003-08-03 10:52 PM


Hey!  Changed your mind?  I am glad you did cause this is great stuff!!!!!!  Hugs

"Well I know, these voices must be my soul."   -Dave Matthews-

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
5 posted 2003-08-04 07:47 PM


Thanx Annie.  You're personality is cute.

GIS

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