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Gabkicks Junior Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 13 |
I don't want your pity Just give me death Kill whats within me Take away my breath The disease hit me after just one of her stares The pain ripped through me and no one cared There was no blood, only tears onseen and screams unheard from words not said. There was no love, no sweet soft lips, no tender hand against my head. Only pain I ask you to take away Before my thoughts and actions lead me astray... from you |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
hmmm...powerful. I liked it. You described yourself well. ~Lex  |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Nice, a grain of rice against a basketball. GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
nice write, dont know how i missed this one... "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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