Dark Poetry #3 |
Why? |
PointlesS Junior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 21Oconomowoc, Wisconsin |
I sit around shedding some tears I remember the times thoughout the years I think about what all went wrong Why did he do it, did he not belong? A cry for help is how it began But time passed and he made up his plan He killed himself with tons of pain Everyone's stunned, no one can explain Why is the word that tears up my mind How could I not see this? Was I that blind? I think of what could've been done I could've saved him, but instead I shunned Where ever he is, I wish I could say These feelings and thoughts that eat me away Goodbye is something I wish I could tell But now he's gone, and probably in hell Oh how I wish and hope I'll know Maybe that'll lighten the blow Never again will I see my friend Just why did he have to make it end? |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
But now he's gone, and probably in hell ------------- Raw and pure. That was a scarry thought for someone to picture their friend "probably in hell" but fact is it more than likely true. Kinda creepy if you think about it. But this was a very nice poem. GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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Lexia Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 111Nowhere |
Intense, but really good. |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Venting through writing is very constructive for all. I agree, very intense and well written. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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