Dark Poetry #3 |
“polar regions” |
coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
The soft elbow of grace nudges a soul toward the light, up a foggy path of narrow steps and shifting edges, along crumbling battlements of belief. Foundations of truth once stolid and confirmed, now sentinels of decay, unable to restrain the invading hordes of darkness, ravaging the radiance of the mind. Fog like a folded blanket smothers all perception, dank with the sweat of hallucination, thick with the silence of unspoken imaginings. Through the narrowing iris of the mind’s eye oblivion receives the vision, as earthquake canyons open beneath tumbling walls to swallow the last stones of faith, falling screams of reason, echoing into the abyss, like victim voices of volcanic sacrifice. Out of the labyrinth caverns of ritual, fly white eyed ravens, blindly mimicking the mystic chants of priesthood, as anointed shamans of the grail, blend blood with wine into homogenous atonement, dispensing reborn innocence from pulpit pyramids, where bleached skulls and martyred hearts corrupt the harvest, salvaged from the killing floors of virgin violence. On backward winding clocks time gives way to tempest, to hurricane force memories and tsunami diatribes, revoking the sacred oaths and sanguine monologues, of post-mortem ministry. “Focus, focus on the light”, comes a voice of pity, calm and clear, above the roaring waterfalls of torrent loneliness, above the wanton cries of infant instinct. Through stained glass shards the light reflects a rainbow, and on these pristine prisms, the fog is lifted. As holy waters merge with the dark pigments of unmitigated madness, a soul surrenders, to the fragile gravity of a floating iceberg, somewhere between the polar regions of the brain. "The rose, like the cactus flower, protects herself with thorns. We however, impale ourselves on their beauty." WFS [This message has been edited by coyote (07-31-2003 10:05 PM).] |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
a soul surrenders, to the fragile gravity of a floating iceberg, somewhere between the polar regions of the brain. ----------------- sounds like the Titanic and a foggy night at 30 knots in mid ocean boomed for this iceberge with only one place to go. Down. I thought that part of your poem sounded something like this. Nice write. GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Thanks for reading GIS, I'm glad you liked it. "The rose, like the cactus flower, protects herself with thorns. We however, impale ourselves on their beauty." WFS [This message has been edited by coyote (08-01-2003 07:46 PM).] |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
"As holy waters merge with the dark pigments of unmitigated madness, a soul surrenders," -beautiful "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Thanks eor. I appreciate your comments. coyote "The rose, like the cactus flower, protects herself with thorns. We however, impale ourselves on their beauty." WFS [This message has been edited by coyote (08-01-2003 07:47 PM).] |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
Whoa, that really took me aback, i quite enjoyed it, it was all very surreal to me and extremely beautiful. Two thumbs up...and a pinky for good measure. |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Thanks for the kind comments, Mad Hatter. coyote "The rose, like the cactus flower, protects herself with thorns. We however, impale ourselves on their beauty." WFS |
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