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Dark Poetry #3

You see it.

Ankaria
Junior Member

since 2003-07-26

Posts 35
Sask. Canada

0 posted 2003-07-31 02:52 PM

Don't you miss
        That deadly kiss?
She rears her head
                  Young minds are dead.
Long dark hair
          Breath of air.
  Lust and greed
        sinful needs
Ugly lust
      ideal bust
Nice and tall
  Now don't u fall...

She rears her head,

                          Young minds are dead.

Eromyna
Member

since 2002-11-29

Posts 306
Pheonix, AZ, USA

1 posted 2003-07-31 03:14 PM

Interesting... but I'm not sure I get it.

"I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation."

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

2 posted 2003-07-31 04:50 PM

Kinda like a black widow? Yeah, females seem to have that power sometimes. The power to get their way most if not all of the time and if they dont,..... watch out.
LOL!

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

Ankaria
Junior Member

since 2003-07-26

Posts 35
Sask. Canada

3 posted 2003-07-31 08:20 PM

It's about the ideal image that people are supposed to live up to. People suffer anorexia, depression and other illnesses and sometimes it leads to severe problems and even death. It's the whole black window ideal that eats away at people. You know?

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

4 posted 2003-08-04 09:13 PM

this is good and deep.

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