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Ceinwyn
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0 posted 2003-07-31 12:21 PM


nightmares
cling to my thoughts
gasping for life
in the middle of the day
rocking back and forth
gotta shake
the pain
the impulses
wishing i could suffocate
the tears
that are stuck within my throat
you kissed me again lastnight
funny how a dream
could feel so real
when you're never coming back
how dare my subconscience
haunt me
with tantalizing droplets
of emotion
you whispered so softly
"I love you.."
in my ear
i know it's the sweet intoxication
of pain
playing tricks on my fragile state of mind
rocking back and forth
submerging deep
within the pain
how *censor* naive can i be
to even allow you to
have control over me
in my dreams
rocking back and forth
oh how i long
to suffocate the love
that is stuck between
my nightmares and waking dreams...



If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (07-31-2003 12:22 PM).]

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wranx
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
1 posted 2003-07-31 02:16 PM


Nicely done Kris. One of your best
green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
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New Caney, Tx
2 posted 2003-07-31 04:38 PM


Dark and saddistic

I liked it.


eor
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since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
3 posted 2003-07-31 06:06 PM


"wishing i could suffocate
the tears
that are stuck within my throat
you kissed me again lastnight
funny how a dream
could feel so real"

absoutly brillant!!!!

lovely write!!!

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

PointlesS
Junior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 21
Oconomowoc, Wisconsin
4 posted 2003-08-01 12:44 PM


quote:
funny how a dream
could feel so real

I really love that part...

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