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Dark Poetry #3

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Annie
Junior Member

since 2003-07-23

Posts 42
Seattle, WA

0 posted 2003-07-31 10:57 AM

White & Black

Darkness
Hangs all about
My mind as icicles
From the gutter; glistening but
Deadly.

"Well I know, these voices must be my soul." -Dave Matthews-

Ankaria
Junior Member

since 2003-07-26

Posts 35
Sask. Canada

1 posted 2003-07-31 02:39 PM

Nice association with the icicles. I really enjoyed this. It was short but had a point.

p.s. I'm Annie too. heh

Ankaria
"Is all we see or seem, but a dream within a dream?"
-Edgar Allen Poe

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

2 posted 2003-07-31 04:41 PM

Sharp weapons of nature just for you. Nice

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

3 posted 2003-08-23 09:50 AM

I like this. Nice write.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2003-08-23 02:21 PM

Annie, very nice . . .
worded differently and you have a
senyru on your hands:

1st line:  5 syllables
2nd line:  7 syllables
3rd line:  5 syllables

nice job
xxoo

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