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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Two souls burn for one another They love and lust near complete A gift from God and so they meet Two souls set here together Life content with mutuality Plant the seeds of tragedy One soul left, in death the other Seperated petals of a black rose Apart forever a trickle of music from a well |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Nice write, Itchy Looks as if yer likin' the flavor of free verse ~wranx |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Yeah. It is a little easier to use and a little more complex. Freedom of John Bones. GIS |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
loved this one greeny, i did!yea! "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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Annie Junior Member
since 2003-07-23
Posts 42Seattle, WA |
Beautiful, sad, made my heart hurt. "Well I know, these voices must be my soul." -Dave Matthews- |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Damn...great stuff  |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Starts off easy, then gets nice and deep/deep. I like. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thanx guys. After I wrote it it felt like I was coming out of a funeral home. a trickle of music from a well |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Black roses from the deep end of the pool. A kewl write. coyote "The rose, like the cactus flower, protects herself with thorns. We however, impale ourselves on their beauty." WFS |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
This sent chills running up my spine. you never fail to impress me. Had this been longer I'd been in tears. The part about the petals of the rose..that was so good. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thanx Lexy, this was my second write using free verse. And I take it it was sucessful. Thanx again. GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
So sad..  SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
*smiles and nods* I agree I like this as well... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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22NICK22 Member
since 2003-05-29
Posts 54 |
nicely written |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thanx everybody. Thats really cool you responded to this one because I thought it had already had its day. GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
OH H**L YES! I am soo glad you told me to check out this poem! To say the least, I really REALLY enjoyed it! WOW... THANKS! |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
thanx blackhalo, i was hoping youd like it. GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
 I love the flow of this! Great Job!! "No man is EVER worth my tears, and the one who is, will never make me cry!" [This message has been edited by qtpieelmo (08-19-2003 01:41 PM).] |
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eternalblu Junior Member
since 2003-08-17
Posts 11Pennsylvania, US |
It was very nice...good job! It's easier to run |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
qtpieelmo- thanx. I read one of your poems before and it made me respect women more. Im always glad when someone likes my work. Thanx again. eternalblu- thanx, like i told qtpie I love it when someone enjoys something i wrote. GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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