in the arms of the angel...

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Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2003-07-28 06:11 PM

take your words
of comfort
tuck them in
your back pocket
and let me
drown within
my thoughts
trust me
i know i'm not worthy
of the air
that we breathe
let me
just let me
continously hit rewind
on my favourite song
I need some distraction...
oh beautiful release...
to slowly wither
In the arms of the angel
'cos right now
i can't find comfort in
your friendship
so fake
so hollow
take your thoughts
shove them
back beneath
the rock you crawled under
let me
just let me
find some peace tonight
In the arms of the angel...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (07-28-2003 06:17 PM).]

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

1 posted 2003-07-28 09:21 PM

hmmm..I love that song as well. beautiful lyrics, I wrote them all out once. reading them over and over.
This was good.
~Lex

Dark Kisses
Member

since 2001-06-24

Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas

2 posted 2003-07-28 11:18 PM

Lovely, just lovely

A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2003-07-29 03:31 AM

Oh, I can hear you singing this because they are thoughts within my own head indeed

beautiful Kris
xxoo

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

4 posted 2003-07-30 10:41 PM

"and let me
drown within
my thoughts
trust me
i know i'm not worthy"

this hit the spot, perfectly for me, beautiful, absoutly, darkly beautiful...

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

5 posted 2003-07-31 04:29 PM

Ive felt that way before and its "times like that we learn to love again" at least long enough to actually say the words "I love you" and get it again. Nice write.

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

6 posted 2003-08-08 02:46 AM

Ah..K...and you've been missed as well..

this is a beauty. (letting me-self wallow in this a bit)...and um...pass that angel along eh? *wink*

loved. loved, loved this hun..

take care!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

22NICK22
Member

since 2003-05-29

Posts 54

7 posted 2003-08-08 12:54 PM

I like your Dionysian approach, yet it still contains a very Appolonian structure....

Lexia
Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 111
Nowhere

8 posted 2003-08-08 01:38 PM

Wow, I really like this. It rings so very true to me.

Lex

You may only be one person to the world, but you may also be the world to one person.

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

9 posted 2003-08-09 09:07 AM

A fine self purge here Ceinwyn, very well expressed, and containing more than a few personally revealing thoughts.

coyote

blackhalo
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since 2000-02-15

Posts 467
Denver, CO

10 posted 2003-08-10 12:00 PM

Very gripping! This piece was much enjoyed... In fact, I think I'll go read it again.

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