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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn 
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Dark? Well, it’s a whole lot more than brooding children playing make-believe vampire in sodden, sullen alleys Or moonlit graveyard games involving circles and stars and the neighborhood cat More than cheap shades at sundown and a fashionably bad attitude No, that’s not where you’ll find it Dark arrives when you can no longer choose ~wranx "I've lost all I can...now, it's your turn" |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
I see it follows you. If it didn't, you wouldn't be able to write this way. Very good, I like the lead up to. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
and the pathway is becoming dim . . . xxoo |
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IcyFlamez89 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 292Jersey City NJ |
You just helped me reaffirm why I like the dark forums so much, with writes like this...  |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
so true, you can no longer choose... once the blanket of darkness envolpes your being, there is no turing back... nice write wranx, as usual... "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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Annie Junior Member
since 2003-07-23
Posts 42Seattle, WA |
EXACTLY! |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
That same prison. Its awesome how you write. Its like with your poems when one looks at your picture theyll never actually see who you are. GIS |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Bet you thought I only hung out in Open...  |
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Lady Moiraine Junior Member
since 2003-07-29
Posts 24Florida |
in reply to: ___________________________________________ Dark arrives when you can no longer choose ___________________________________________ I agree. My personna online is that of a vampire and I find that even in my unreal world, the dark becomes very real. |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
ace |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
Nicely done, enough said. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Learn em ed learn em |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Ed, I'll be visiting here more often. this is going in my library. Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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