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brian sites
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since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475
usa

0 posted 2003-07-27 02:08 AM


as the night
   spreads
her long legs
     around
my nose
      I catch the scent
of life
    pulsing
quiver
running

I can almost
taste
     it
        hot
upon my tongue

but it
   eludes
       me
behind
the glass
wall
     of
    the lovers'
sweet
   torture

the caught needs the catcher

to be
   dancing alive
on my
    straining
outstretched
hunger

[This message has been edited by brian sites (07-27-2003 02:35 AM).]

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devina
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539
Cali
1 posted 2003-07-27 02:16 AM


Just spit and I will feed.
meow...

Loved the slickness of this one siBri...
you are too good to all that read you~

I bow. or bend. or whatever.

loved this hunny.

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



wranx
Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
2 posted 2003-07-27 02:37 AM


Damn Boy!

This tastes just fine


Guess I'll have to start writing with dark ink now...hehe


Yer Bro...

brian sites
Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475
usa
3 posted 2003-07-27 02:41 AM



thank you T

you sweet

you said hi to your
New Orleans sis yet?

brian sites
Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475
usa
4 posted 2003-07-27 02:43 AM


hey buddy!

yep
it's lookin
all familar-like


serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

5 posted 2003-07-27 03:01 AM


smiling sweetly...

I finally found someone who loves the dark just a little bit more than I...

sexy bri...

kissing you, and I only suspect where that mouth has been and it's STILL sweet...


eor
Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
6 posted 2003-07-27 03:18 PM


ohlala, very nice write, loved the sensuality(sp?) of it...

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
7 posted 2003-07-27 08:38 PM


smiling here . . .
looking at my screen in an entirely different light
xxoo

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