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T-Bird
Junior Member
since 2003-07-02
Posts 17
Washington, United States

0 posted 2003-07-26 09:11 PM


Do You Even Care?
Do you know how hard I work for your approval?
But I never get it.
I’m not exactly sure what’s wrong with me,
You never wonder, your always too busy yelling at me.
I try so hard, do u even see that?
All I want is for you to like me,
But you don’t, and I don’t know why.
I’ve tried for so long…
I QUIT!
All you ever do is yell and get mad at me.
Do you see what you have done to me?
I’ve cut, burned, and everything else imaginable to myself.
I’ve made a lot of promises not to hurt myself anymore, but I’m not sure it’s worth it.
Do you see how depressed I am?
I don’t wanna be here anymore…
I can’t take it I’m going insane.
All this anger, hatred, and depression I fell right now is all because of you, mom and dad.


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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2003-07-28 06:08 PM


We'll be issuing you a new mom and dad first thing in the morning...actually wish it was that easy...but we are stuck with the mom and dads we have...and fortunately most do the best they can...sorry you are having problems...if the family can't find solutions perhaps a counselor is in order...listen to Dr. Laura...she tells it like it is...James
mysticpoe
Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883

2 posted 2003-08-01 01:04 PM


Let it pour on out T-Bird. Sounds like it's time to start pleasing yourself in a good/positive way. I like the emotion place into your poem. Let it out and keep pouring it out through your writing. There are a lot of great things stored inside you, as w/all of us. Go looking for it and write about it. Write on my friend/fellow poet.

mysticpoe, poets helping poets, makes more poets.

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
3 posted 2003-08-01 03:04 PM


Parents can drive you mad sometimes.  And actually I can relate quite a bit.  My dad and I havent really got a long in years and its doubtful we'll start doing a whole lot better. It doesnt really make me angry but it does make me feel cheap.

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

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