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devina
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Cali

0 posted 2003-07-26 04:23 PM



Sceptical loss...
Brings ground to my knees,
To lay softened petals
~from bloom~...to defeat.

Withered and empty...
(I seek inner self)
To condemn this heartache~
(Remind of my wealth)

One beauty
between
my soulmate and I
One solid standstill
(another blushed cry)

Warm with emotion~
I grant the become...
Through this life
I remain
A mother
of but one...


***For all my friends that have not known till now~
this has been keepin my love from gracing your work for so long. Back now to heal and to exist...if but gradually...

*kisses*

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



© Copyright 2003 Tanya Nicole Bustamante - All Rights Reserved
mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28
Posts 883

1 posted 2003-07-26 06:21 PM


Very, Very good!!

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

Eromyna
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since 2002-11-29
Posts 306
Pheonix, AZ, USA
2 posted 2003-07-26 06:36 PM


I like.

"I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation."

eor
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since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
3 posted 2003-07-26 08:41 PM


nice write...i enjoyed very much...

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
4 posted 2003-07-27 12:03 PM


I too . . .

I remain
A mother
of but one...

this is lovely Devina
xxoo

brian sites
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since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475
usa
5 posted 2003-07-27 12:21 PM


I am very sorry to hear about that Tanya

but yes
heal
with us...without us if need be
but heal

you are blessed with one
and love

this poem
sun...shadow

glad your back
hug

wranx
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
6 posted 2003-07-27 12:50 PM


SiBri said it best. You know you are loved here, with us.

And the write? You know...Don't you?

All the best, deTanya
Ed

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

7 posted 2003-07-27 03:27 AM


oh sis...

come here and let me hold you awhile.

I'm so glad you came home.

You can rest here, lovely one.

We'll circle you, standing guard while you rest. LOVE YOU.

You have my heart, lady.




EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
8 posted 2003-08-05 09:53 AM


Powerful write, take your time, and take care!

i'm not saying anybody's wrong or right,
just know i'd die to be with you tonight ~ sandford

green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
9 posted 2003-08-05 01:53 PM


Your writting is beautiful.  I enjoy your work.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

devina
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539
Cali
10 posted 2003-08-08 02:40 AM


It has taken me some time to finally reply to all of you with your beautiful support...I am grateful now for what I have in life and thank you all with the deepest sentiment for the loves.

and my sibri? kisses man...could never do it without you ya know?

wranx...just hugs love. just hugs. well..a few more...he he

and sis...you are gorgeous and I miss you ever so on these lonesome full moons...

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



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