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mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28
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0 posted 2003-07-26 11:37 AM



before we came
and our future yet known
a gift bestowed
from the light, eternal
as given, a backpack
wisdom contained
and our self, then
entered
this life
we traveled through the challenged
darkness
this darkness for us is known
so now
to be a part of
such display, the choice
and our own, as it may
be that our coming
home, again
is that gift, for our future
will always remain
the pack of wisdom, this part
of us.

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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Annie
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since 2003-07-23
Posts 42
Seattle, WA
1 posted 2003-07-26 06:27 PM


Ok you're making me wonder too!  Hugs
eor
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since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
2 posted 2003-07-26 08:45 PM


can you open it for me...

nice write

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

ecrivan
Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923
my own state
3 posted 2003-08-10 10:22 AM


continue you imaginative writes


Lexia
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since 2003-07-20
Posts 111
Nowhere
4 posted 2003-08-10 11:14 AM


Ooh...so many possibilities with this. Good write.

Alexia

You may only be one person to the world, but you may also be the world to one person.

eor
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since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
5 posted 2003-08-14 12:47 PM


movin on up...this needs more response...

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

mysticpoe
Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883

6 posted 2003-08-14 11:01 AM


Thanks eor, we're you been man.

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

mysticpoe
Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883

7 posted 2003-08-14 11:08 AM


Annie, ecrivan and lexia, I apologize for not responding. I just noticed that I didn't, today. If a reader takes the time to comment. I feel the writer should reciprocate. Just the way I feel. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment. Appreciate!!

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

eor
Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
8 posted 2003-08-15 12:11 PM


sorry poe, i was out of town for a couple of weeks, but i',m back now! muhahahaha...

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

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