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Cradled Fear |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
The sun mellows its extraction, as beliefs fade through shadows of crisp autumn, tragic to the chirping velvet of spring. Cradled to the alley of perceptive eyes, channels singe on capered fear, looming around convenient spots. Bewilder it may be, but distinctive it is, for those who virtue or at ease. Bordered around corners, fatally inducing its rosemary touch, the fruit shows promise for only so much. She walks, stumbles, Collapses upon the crease hinged underneath the garden. Savory touch wielded her obsession, as she was teased from her palm, echoing her deception. If she could only just grasp it, even indulge in its butterfly flight, she could conquer it, yet she will never lay her soul on it again. |
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Peeps-Peter Junior Member
since 2003-07-19
Posts 14 |
This is beautifully put, and after reading it twice I'm not quite sure what it means..thus I feel I can't get a full appreciation of this piece. Would you mind explaining..? Peter [This message has been edited by Peeps-Peter (07-25-2003 05:29 PM).] |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Peter- Its basically about the appreciation of life, and how sometimes things are just out of grasp under the circumstances. I appreciate your comment, always welcome  Tomer |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
your images are vivid nice Tomer enjoyed this |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Have to agree with my siBri here hun. Beautiful imagery you've set before my feasting eyes. ~D Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Thanks Dev- your comments are always welcome. Tomer |
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