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Silent Evincar
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since 2003-07-22
Posts 179
Here There and Places Between

0 posted 2003-07-22 04:22 AM



  Alright lets give this a shot.

The missing clause in your paper-work of life,
it detours you form the obvious goal.

One last piece in your jig-saw puzzle of Love,
an empty crevice of questionable emotion.

Another bullet-hole through your lack of faith,
oblivios to the one who holds you on high.

Repetitious disection of each piece of your personality,
bewildered unto the loss of pained identity.

A blackhole within delivers your scared body,
inploding an existence to one of sinful death.



© Copyright 2003 Nicholas Stauffer - All Rights Reserved
dertah
Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584

1 posted 2003-07-22 02:41 PM


and the boy cries out in a wail, and the howl resounded by millions.  good onneeee.  you know me, i like to ramble.
Lexy
Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California
2 posted 2003-07-24 08:25 PM


I have read your replies around here, and I must say that this being the first poem I've read from you I am very impressed. I expect to see more.
~Lex...

mysticpoe
Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883

3 posted 2003-07-26 06:14 PM


I like this a lot, Nice.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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