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tom waits
Junior Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 18


0 posted 2003-07-20 06:58 AM



Anita:
Sunday morning,
blue and bitter
Saturday’s better
and Monday’s fitter.

Chicken on Tuesday
salt the next wave
bland oil on Thursday
midnight love, Friday.

We came as kings
for I am more a man
than you.

Isle babe in white
pail skinned, black haired
bitch.

© Copyright 2003 tom waits - All Rights Reserved
mysticpoe
Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883

1 posted 2003-07-26 06:19 PM


The last stanza hit me like a hammer, good writing here.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

tom waits
Junior Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 18

2 posted 2003-07-27 10:48 PM


thank you.take advil.
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