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Bruised
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since 2003-07-12
Posts 13
Indiana, USA

0 posted 2003-07-13 01:03 AM



"The Way of Darkness"

Look into the sky
what do you see?
It's raining blood

Look into the shadows
what do you see?
You see an image of yourself

How do you like it?
Being all alone in the world
don't you ever wanna change?

How do you like it?
Hiding in the darkness of your shame
don't you ever wanna come to the light?

We're all stubborn
but how can you deny your destiny?
How can you hurt the ones you love?

We're all stubborn
but how can you deny your destiny?
How can you sit and watch the days go by?

How can you not care?
My tears go running
yet you only sit and stare

How can you not care?
My heart goes to you
yet you turn away

I'm only fighting for your sake
don't take me for granted
take my hand

I'm only your friend for so long
don't take me for granted
please don't push me away

~ Tenshi

"If it's too loud, you're too old!" - A Rock Artist

© Copyright 2003 Tenshi - All Rights Reserved
Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
1 posted 2003-07-13 08:44 AM


well i believe i've took the honor of being the first to read and reply to a great piece of work. wheather it's to be a poem or song it works great. i love it.
Mick Hawkes
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since 2000-10-26
Posts 90
Tees-side , England
2 posted 2003-07-13 04:22 PM


I'm only fighting for your sake
don't take me for granted
take my hand

life is just like that, true friendships i think are harder than love to work out, i stopped my best friend commiting suicide 2 weeks ago & she thanked me then has since refused to even admit i exist... i will send her this poem..... it explains how i feel better than any thing i can write.. thanks

Never take life too seriously - None of us gets out alive!

Bruised
Junior Member
since 2003-07-12
Posts 13
Indiana, USA
3 posted 2003-07-14 01:59 AM


Your welcome, sir.  And thanks to you both.

~ Tenshi

"If it's too loud, you're too old!" - A Rock Artist

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