Dark Poetry #3 |
Darkness not so dark. |
Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
ah the darkness taken in, I breathe with a sense of urgency, sadness hugs my soul, my one and only true companion, my one and only friend indeed, ah darkness lights the way, silently it tiptoes in, invitingly though not excepted it must follow me through the maze, blackness seeks me out, weighing around about my eyes, bandaging the cuts from deep within, darkness breathes so easily, no departing so I'm told. [This message has been edited by Rosebud1229 (07-08-2003 11:32 PM).] |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
very nice work. an excellent sense of depression right here. |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
thx it's in my blood, what can I tell yah |
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allen silver New Member
since 2003-06-16
Posts 3 |
loved your poem. great form also, think i'll look for more of your work |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
thx Allen that's very sweet I think you'll be surprised at my variety of writes by the way welcome here, it has been a great place for me to write |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
this is a great piece to which I can totally relate too. due to what i've seen and felt over the past few months. because i'm a soldier. once again great work and i hope to see more and hope i get the time to read it. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
thx Jeremiah, I hope all is going well with you, I know it is a hard time to go through being a soldier. Just keep writing and you'll be amazed what comes out. |
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