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Dark Poetry #3
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dertah
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since 2003-06-18
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0 posted 2003-07-08 01:19 AM



people burn
burn in the depths
flames melting him
searing her
melting and searing me
and we all burn
except for you

because you feel no love

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mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28
Posts 883

1 posted 2003-07-08 01:58 PM


There's a lot of meaning here. Nice.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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