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dertah
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since 06-18-2003
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0 posted 07-05-2003 11:52 PM       View Profile for dertah   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for dertah


i want to feast on
your flesh,
absorb your heart
because it should be mine,
feed on your eyes,
eat your lips,
dine on fine hands
that should caress only me,
consume your breasts,
and devour your soul,
your soul...the only soul,
my one chance
at heaven from hell,
my deliverance,
my salvation,
my hope,
hope that my life,
might continue without you
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Purple Poet On Wheels
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since 06-21-2002
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1 posted 07-06-2003 07:56 PM       View Profile for Purple Poet On Wheels   Email Purple Poet On Wheels   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Purple Poet On Wheels

WOW This is the darkest love poem I've ever read and  I LOVE IT

cheers,

PPOW
Dark Kisses
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since 06-24-2001
Posts 372
Flat lands of Kansas


2 posted 07-06-2003 08:31 PM       View Profile for Dark Kisses   Email Dark Kisses   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Kisses

One word...... "Wonderful"
Midnitesun
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Gaia


3 posted 07-07-2003 01:13 AM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

HMM...
I taste best with salsa.
Enotneicna
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since 06-06-99
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4 posted 07-10-2003 01:04 AM       View Profile for Enotneicna   Email Enotneicna   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Enotneicna's Home Page   View IP for Enotneicna

excellent write!!!!!!!!!!

Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!


colifer
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since 09-20-2003
Posts 40
Ohio


5 posted 10-03-2003 01:25 PM       View Profile for colifer   Email colifer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for colifer

Now this is one of the best poems i've read. looked you up since you keep doing me the same consideration and i loke your stuff ALOT. i don't like dark much but this one was absolutely fantastinc.
   It's your IDEAS that i REALLY like!
 
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