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dertah
Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584


0 posted 2003-07-05 11:52 PM



i want to feast on
your flesh,
absorb your heart
because it should be mine,
feed on your eyes,
eat your lips,
dine on fine hands
that should caress only me,
consume your breasts,
and devour your soul,
your soul...the only soul,
my one chance
at heaven from hell,
my deliverance,
my salvation,
my hope,
hope that my life,
might continue without you

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Purple Poet On Wheels
Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 145
Pittsburgh/Edinboro, PA
1 posted 2003-07-06 07:56 PM


WOW This is the darkest love poem I've ever read and  I LOVE IT

cheers,

PPOW

Dark Kisses
Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas
2 posted 2003-07-06 08:31 PM


One word...... "Wonderful"
Midnitesun
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since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647
Gaia
3 posted 2003-07-07 01:13 AM


HMM...
I taste best with salsa.

Enotneicna
Member
since 1999-06-06
Posts 340
Oakland, Or, USA
4 posted 2003-07-10 01:04 AM


excellent write!!!!!!!!!!

Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!



colifer
Junior Member
since 2003-09-20
Posts 37
Ohio
5 posted 2003-10-03 01:25 PM


Now this is one of the best poems i've read. looked you up since you keep doing me the same consideration and i loke your stuff ALOT. i don't like dark much but this one was absolutely fantastinc.
   It's your IDEAS that i REALLY like!

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