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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2003-07-01 11:08 PM


I quit once before
and started back again.
Its a never ending phase
until the very end.

I think im strong enough
and say it all the time.
Then fall right back
the habit like a ryhme.

Group then another burn
and finally set a flame.
Feel it inside control
left its me to blame.

Villian free to myself
A stomach full regret
Chase chase make it stop
Remember I forget

One of mine has died
Another is near enough
All just to make it stop
The pull is much too tough
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Enjoy

© Copyright 2003 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
eor
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since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
1 posted 2003-07-02 09:07 PM


ooooh i like...deep stuff, your style is blunt, to the point, nice...

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade ofa wood cutter, the eldest sno of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
2 posted 2003-07-02 11:50 PM


Thanks eor. I like to say it like it is and I dont think I can help but be deep when I write.  Thanks again.
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