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a_hollowman
Junior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 30
Winnipeg, Manitoba, Canada

0 posted 2003-06-29 12:33 PM


My girlfriend dumped me
My go is dying or long dead
My house in burning, wait and see
My problems are important i said
I don't have anything else to say
What a waste of time this is

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eor
Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
1 posted 2003-06-29 08:38 PM


no emotion is ever a waste of time...
Ladybug
Member
since 2003-06-17
Posts 236
Massachusetts
2 posted 2003-07-02 10:44 PM


Have to agree with Eor on this one.

Besides, you said it yourself: "My problems are important i said" -- See!  If you feel it, it has value.  Let it out!  

Every new beginning comes from some other beginning's end...

Alnilam
Member
since 2003-07-04
Posts 75

3 posted 2003-07-07 10:11 PM


and once i again i realise i am not alone... so simple but so true in at least my case as well. i liked it.

~*Alnilam*~
"The worst tragedy for a poet is to be admired through being misunderstood."

dertah
Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584

4 posted 2003-07-08 12:32 PM


if only we could go without emotions.  nice work.  id like to say there are plenty of fish in the sea, but theres not.  sometimes we just miss our chance.
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