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somethinginyoursocks Junior Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 28IN, the U.S. of A. |
Find me there when sleep is in a dream; Fairy-land is a homeless wonder and Death awakens you... Find me there When the paper is blank with an empty pen, But all your fists of rage can't release within... Find me there As Autumn falls and Pain washes away Spring, the Darkness crawls and hibernates in your deepest being... Find me there When Hope is a lonely wanderer cold, and alone with the thought of suicide wanting THEN to be found... Find me there -I don't need a signature- |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
"As Autumn falls and Pain washes away Spring, the Darkness crawls and hibernates in your deepest being... Find me there" I like it, but ain't sure why yet.....  Great write Something! Tima Some women wait for something to change and nothing does, so they change themselves. |
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teenpoet Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 280Michigan |
I like this one an awful lot. And to be honest with you I'm not entirely to sure why but I do like the flow of the words. Great job on this one. |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
i a glad i found your poem here, i like, powerful, very powerful... |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
I too am glad I stumbled across this. I must say I am like all the others...the poem just gives me this really dark/evil vibe and it does it very well. I just don't know exactly why I am so drawn to it. I am deffinately interested in seeing more of your work though. |
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