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click1 Member
since 2003-03-25
Posts 152usa |
doc sez "that lump/bump/spot We gotta talk.. " SHOCK! Have you got your affairs in order? are you "right with God?" can you hang on for a cure? "I'm Sorry!?" so..life ain't sure time is suddenly fluid why? I'm too young.. Aren't we all?? I need more time to set things right.. "no" I need more time to make ammends "no" "SORRY?" I hope you understand.. I never meant ...what I said... But, I love you and you and you.. The wind,and sky,and waking up in the morning.. I DON'T WANT TO DIE! Life is special, and we can not cheat... Be sure to say.. "you are special" to those who are.. I forgive those who aren't God bless all WHO can say what we have.. memory, Faith, love, life... Be thankfull>>> again Click Click |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Welcome to Passions In Poetry. This was a well-written poem. I look forward to reading more of your poetry and your responses to our wonderful family of poets! Please check your e-mail for a special greeting from all of us here at PIP. Ethel/garysgirl Moderator/Passions In Poetry |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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