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“sacerdotal”
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“sacerdotal” |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
long lamented fatal breaths are fully uttered from the straits forcing payment in cold blood to venal brokers of the fates and the plans of kings and captains disregard the checks and mates while temptation feigns confession in the trials at heaven’s gates we light flames to life eternal votive candles in St. Kate’s Mother Mary weeps in vesper at this Global Village violence And Our Father speaks in tongues cut from the mouths of silence © WFS 2003 "The rose, like the cactus flower, protects herself with thorns. We however, impale ourselves on their beauty." WFS [This message has been edited by coyote (06-19-2003 10:03 AM).] |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
powerful, to me this i a poem about death...maybe some senseless act, but i like it, alot... |
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laurie Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 153canada, ontario |
yeah, what eor said. wicked rhythm, you should read 'blood red tears..', it just got put back in after some discussion.... l think you'll get something out of it. laurie. thanx for the chance to read this, yours is better than the one l wrote... (you'll understand if you read brt...) |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Thanks for reading, eor and laurie. Actually the title is the give away on this one. sacerdotal: (sas er do tl) is an adjective meaning priestly, or pertaining to priestly things. coyote "The rose, like the cactus flower, protects herself with thorns. We however, impale ourselves on their beauty." WFS |
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