When Your Heart Turns Cold

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Dark Poetry #3

When Your Heart Turns Cold

kadafi09
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since 2003-06-17

Posts 143
California, United States

0 posted 2003-06-17 06:59 PM

When Your Heart Turns Cold
You no longer care.
Your soul feels withered and old.
People fear your cold and hardened stare.
A wall is erected around your heart.
Nothing can pass through.
Pain, joy, everything, becomes trivial to your heart.
A baby's cry becomes nothing too.

blackhalo
Member

since 2000-02-15

Posts 467
Denver, CO

1 posted 2003-06-17 09:56 PM

I'd say that pretty well covers it... Well done.

"Courage is most readily gained by the desire to avoid looking like a d***ed fool!" :P

Forgotenandgone
Member

since 2003-05-07

Posts 52
NC

2 posted 2003-06-18 08:06 PM

Good poem I like that whole wall thing good analigie....(i cant spell very well sorry...but you can sound it out)..

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

3 posted 2003-06-18 10:31 PM

You seem to care about writing. Nice job here.

mysticpoe

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