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Faceless Nameless |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys 
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Am I a nameless face or a faceless name I’m forced to live in our disease, stuck in filth Is it a coincidence…(co…incidence) That I realize…(real…eyes) our demise If you could see the world through my eyes Imperfect perfection corrected to be defective Perfect this game of pretending to be caring You don’t care for me no one does In this lonely life I lead You can’t perceive this world you live in How do you expect to leave it when you die God is just an invention to deceive you, see, You don’t understand the level I’m at What means the world to you…possessions This digression can it go further You are living for the past and future The present is the only time that matters NOW. Will you put a name to my face a face to my name Or have you already forgotten I came… |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
powerful emotions eor. you transformed these feelings very well. Nice write, very intense. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
How very sad! it sounds as if this person's friend or partner isn't on the same wavelength, the same page in the book of life. If it's from a first person POV, perhaps, it's time to step away from this space and time, and go forward with your life? Then again, maybe this is all JUST poetry. Emotional hurting, understood. |
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laurie Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 153canada, ontario |
its good, eor... l like. intense, and well thought out. l liked the way you used those.. umm. whatchamacallams.. the weird words (l may be good at english, but that don't mean l memorize the words for antynyms an **** .) whatver a word that sounds the same as another one is.. you know what l mean, l hope. man, my head hurts. lol. l'm making it work too much, l htink. anyway, well written, sorry for the babble, and l like. laurie. |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
thamks, and laurie thats not babble i understood completly... |
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