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RedStoneEB
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0 posted 2003-06-13 10:31 AM


Thoughts they travel afar, to places beyond the skies,
And Places deep down inside,

To dreams

The dreams I hold inside

Wishing…

Wishing that life was happy and long
Instand of the path to what I belong
The path of the hurt and wounded

The one that leads to Sorrow and hurt

The dreams tell my tales
Tales of love I wish belonged to me
Tales of things I wish I could become
Tales of happiness I long to holds in my hands

Like seeds it drains away through the gaps
Slowly losing that what I once held
Hoping it would land in the emptiness inside
And grow into the paths of tomorrow

So many paths inside tangled in the web of life
As the paths ive walked fade from sight
Another’s grow in the places I have yet to tread
Spreading out on paths of future life’s to be told

My thoughts travel back to my mind
Telling me I have yet to find
The answers to the questions of life

But one thing I know…

The paths I walk lead to my own little doom.

[This message has been edited by RedStoneEB (06-13-2003 01:19 PM).]

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JenniX
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since 2003-06-05
Posts 29

1 posted 2003-06-13 12:30 PM


touching poemcontinue writing let out some of your saddness through poetry.
Very touching
JenniX

RedStoneEB
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2 posted 2003-06-13 01:12 PM


glad you liked the read

my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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3 posted 2003-06-20 08:32 PM


Nice expression...James
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