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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2003-06-11 01:05 AM



running around
making no sounds
things arent clear
no one is near
no one is okay

some other day
some other time
mabey gone untill then
time comes to with hold
the soul into yourself

demons seep into yourself
posining your minds and thoughts
take things as they go
it all will just flow

no reason to ask why
no reason to cry
take things as they go
just let it go

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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EagleScorpion
Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever
1 posted 2003-06-11 10:18 PM


uh-huh. I can relate to this, you know... i think this poem is powerful
laurie
Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 153
canada, ontario
2 posted 2003-06-12 05:00 PM


it's nice, foxy... l like. eagle's right, it's a powerful poem. but maybe's spelt as 'maybe', as l did, not mabey... hehe.
just bugging.
laurie.

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