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idleeyes86
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since 2003-06-09
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Somewhere over the rainbow

0 posted 2003-06-09 04:05 PM


Frightened by the silence of a nation dark and cold blinded by the sinners a burning in the soul who defies the meanings of what I say to you fresh until the weekend assume that it was true a heathen in the gutter with arms of white and blue dead to those who pass it alive to me and you hidden by his helmet a flame of purest white uncorrupted by the dullness of society’s dirty light hidden from the people until the summer when the phoenix in the ashes will come and rise again the orphan he can live a life that commences oh so pure a slate devoid of markings a brain that remains unsure for he will not be guided by the chains of an umbilical noose a lack of bloody ties means that he has the chance to choose and though his voice is quiet amongst the drone of the undead crowd one day there will be silence to hear a songbird’s sound as the savage in the jungle of ignorant reverie is scorned by those who envy the way he is so free sentenced to his padded room he’s not allowed to speak but his sprit’s strong as diamonds though his skin and complexion’s weak they say that he is crazy his mind is pure free will but man made structures fall by nature while mountains remain there still nature has the wisdom he’s gained from an eternity’s throne do you trust the wisened gentleman or the angry toddler’s moan for though he allows his charge to roam to succeed to fail to devastate he can punish correct or destroy you despite no feelings of hate.

So though his voice is faint and confused now
And only the toddler is heard

Ignore this polluted voice of society

© Copyright 2003 Chris Murphy - All Rights Reserved
gyiel marlok
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since 2003-06-08
Posts 145
OHIO
1 posted 2003-06-09 08:14 PM


is this someone you know,this is pretty gritty,and gritty's my middle name,i think you got something here,maybe you post more huh.
idleeyes86
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since 2003-06-09
Posts 64
Somewhere over the rainbow
2 posted 2003-06-10 02:14 PM


No I don't really know anyone like this which is kinda why I wrote it, its an attack on society today for the way that first your family moulds you in a certain way hense the "bloody ties" and then society in general pushes you and moulds you into a certain type of person which is not natural. The type of people I list as having this certain fir inside them are the people cut off from family influence and the influence of society
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