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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys 
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hi everyone, i know i have not posted in forever had some computer prolbems yada yada blah blah blah, enjoy... this lifestyle i lead is viciously repeating, a cycle, a circle, a cypher, a sphere, trapped here in the now there is no future just the past coming back into focus, but will i be able to jump the hurdles that once knocked me down to the ground or will i rise above the rest to beat the best in the game of life, i carry all the strife its got me down wondering if it will all come around once again. i carry the world’s pain on my brain, i have knowledge that would make you want to kill yourself, and in it i feel no shame, your soul is the one to blame for my pain, we got this whole life thing wrong, CAN ANYBODY HEAR ME?!?! or am i just going on and on and on and on and on and on and on, to no avail i will not prevail i will fail...again all my lives i have lived follow this cycle trapped in a viciously repeating circle being pulled farther and farther into the cypher about to leave this sphere... will you recognize me when i return to plant you with the seeds of knowledge, or will you force me to keep going round and round and round and round... [This message has been edited by eor (06-08-2003 03:59 PM).] |
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laurie Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 153canada, ontario |
eor... this is the first of yours l've read (l'm new here,) but... l like. l really do like. l'd love to knw what kind of style this is... (l don't know anything bout poetry!) seriously. anyway, please finda way to keep postin even if the comp decides to blow up on you...! laurie. and yes, someone does see you. email me at surizza@hotmail.com, if u get a chance.. l wanna hear more bout this style.. or even just to talk... [This message has been edited by laurie (06-08-2003 09:29 PM).] |
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Chris- Member
since 2003-06-09
Posts 52 |
ah the question of purpose in existence, how does one live knowing the pain of others and the pain of oneself, how can you live knowing you could be doing something about this messed up world but in the end your efforts will be forgotten and in vain, and you portrayed it brilliantly, sure the idea and prospect was blount and obvious but the presentation was shall we say well rounded (just kidding) but seriously i liked it |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Very clever write! mysticpoe |
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gyiel marlok Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 145OHIO |
keep posting this is sweet as hell |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
thank you, all of you!!! |
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