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0 posted 2003-05-28 04:27 PM



Remembering bitter taste
blood on quivering lips
crying too late
lifeless Barbie doll
falls to earth.

Moment of rage
stole breath away
scream to heaven
a second chance
number no longer
In service.

Voices blare
red and blue
flooding the room.

Death row future
gas fills lungs
tears fall
seeing her beyond
the light
granting forgiveness
with open arms.

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1 posted 2003-05-28 08:56 PM


good to have you around again. Did I say that yet? if not...I apologize. Perhaps with your arrival..some quality work in this room..well..not perhaps...because it is already true with what you have posted so far.

Me

You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL

Brad Majors
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2 posted 2003-05-29 01:28 PM


Coming from an artist such as yourself I hold that comment with great pride
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