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SgtMac
Junior Member
since 2003-05-19
Posts 13
0 posted 2003-05-27 11:41 AM

Hey, tough guy
Watch your hands
One more shot
Devil, dead man
You're making horns
Horns that mark
Oops, you're wrong
Don't get caught
With your horns down
Your shadow can't help
He just left
And laughed
My devil
Your dead man
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davidmerriman
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since 2003-04-30
Posts 123
Dallas, TX
1 posted 2003-05-28 01:36 PM

hm i would expand on this.

i left with a general feeling from it, but you just do not express yourself very well, and it's vague.
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