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Dark Kisses
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since 2001-06-24
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Flat lands of Kansas

0 posted 2003-05-23 11:12 PM



The image of your face
Etching in my dreams
Knowing the nightmare will begin
As I start to scream
The warmth I once felt
The nutrients of your veins
The poison of my sins
Staring at ice and flames
Replaying of my thoughts
And the love we once shared
The taking of your soul
The anger has only flared
Don't turn away so quickly
Our lives have only begun
I am searching for your inner being
And I think I have actually won
The truth to your heart
The knowledge of your mind
Little did I realize
That's all I would find

A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness.

© Copyright 2003 Mags - All Rights Reserved
ffpercent243
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since 2003-05-04
Posts 37
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1 posted 2003-05-24 04:02 PM


I like the words that are like music in a night of bleak darkness.
SgtMac
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since 2003-05-19
Posts 13

2 posted 2003-05-27 10:21 AM


"The taking of your soul
The anger has only flared"

Very nice.  That sparks old memories.  

Brad Majors
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Georgia
3 posted 2003-05-28 04:19 PM


I like this
EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
4 posted 2003-05-31 01:53 AM


This is indeed the place for dreams and nightmares my friend!

And now she's in me, always with me, tiny dancer in my hand ~ Bernie Taupin

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2003-05-31 04:15 PM


You can get anything you want at Alice's Restaurant...James
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