(Untitled as always) - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Dark Poetry #3

(Untitled as always)

dancnqeen
New Member

since 2003-05-23

Posts 3
Missouri, USA

0 posted 2003-05-23 09:57 AM

Utter Blastphlomy
Conformist set in their ways
Join me in my battle against myself
As I am my oun venomous enemy
Support me in my own self destruction
You say you love my mind
But truely only love my skin
Choices I make to draw you into my life
Draw me away from myself
I do as you say
And you lie to pull me into your beliefs
Catastrophy
You kill the living sould
And make them Zombies of your own erotic fantasy
To make them slaves of our desire
Only to devour them to their las living cell
With your tounge and your hand

teenpoet
Member

since 2001-10-17

Posts 280
Michigan

1 posted 2003-05-23 11:10 AM

Sorry about that, it's sounds disheartening. But I think it would be nice if a guy would love me for SOMETHING. If I ever have a chance with a guy it most certaintly will NOT be for my body and probably not for my mind, he'd be desperate. But I'm complaining. It's a good poem nonetheless

I don't know if today is a good day, or if yesterday was, or if tomorrow will be, but I'd like to think so.

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

2 posted 2003-05-23 11:51 AM

hey, this was good. For some reason it seemed longer reading it than it actually is, length wise. I don't know maybe it's just me. And yeah it sucks when people just want you for your body, or just whjat they can do to your body. Anyway, good write.
~*~Jenni~*~

Every oak tree started out as a couple of nuts who stood their
ground. --Anonymous

AlostHeart
Member

since 2003-05-01

Posts 78
Wisconsin, U.S.

3 posted 2003-05-23 12:08 PM

Good write and it sucks when that happens!.. Well big hugs................xoxo
~Tori Louise~

Dont ever love a guy that will never love you back, no matter how hard you try.

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.