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princessdani3122
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since 2003-05-14
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0 posted 2003-05-22 07:57 PM



This is the first time I have written anything in about a year , and the first time here ... so be gentle : )
I have to much time to think latley ,
its becoming harder to pretend I don't see me .
For so many years you slowly and methodically broke me down .
You never saw me as me ,
only what you wanted me to be .
I was your puppet not a child , never a daughter ,
only something else you could control ... I guess Mom wasnt enough .
Did it make you feel strong to bruise me ,
did it feel good to see me cry ?
It has been over five years and still ...
I cannot forget .
I just want you gone from my mind ... from my soul .
You deserve no part of me .

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BrokenDreams
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since 2003-02-09
Posts 425
In The Clouds
1 posted 2003-05-23 11:58 AM


First of all, welcome to Passions!

I can really relate to this poem. I have a severely screwed up relationship with my father. He is emotionally and sometimes physically abusive. If you ever want to talk about anything, feel free to email me at dance_chicca16@hotmail.com.
luv, Jenni

Every oak tree started out as a couple of nuts who stood their
ground. --Anonymous

Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175
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2 posted 2003-05-25 01:36 PM


I can relate to an extent..for the past 22 years my mother has manipulated me, used me, blamed me and now for the past 7 years I've broke all ties with her, I have nothing to do with my family..what mother in their right mind would blame her own daughter of being molested? my mother has some serious issues and I give you *hugs* I am here if you care to chat...pryncess_iseult@hotmail.com and you know the funny part is I rarely do the comment thing on another's poetry quite like this..but I hope it doesn't come off as pity but as sincere instead..

Kristen

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

ffpercent243
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since 2003-05-04
Posts 37
United Kingdom
3 posted 2003-05-25 05:40 PM


Sometimes you wish for a Kibbutz upbringing and not one by uncaring parents.
princessdani3122
Junior Member
since 2003-05-14
Posts 18

4 posted 2003-05-25 07:05 PM


thank you Kristen and Jenni , it always helps when you can talk to people who understand where your coming from ... same goes if ya'll ever need to chat it princessdani3122@yahoo.com

danielle

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