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0 posted 2003-05-20 01:52 AM



My thoughts, no longer scattered,
Logic pervades where once was chaos,

With each situation kept in mind,
To the other kind I succumb,

I reboot my mind and of I go,
To a land full of tastelessness,

When I feed on a grape,
I feel no pleasure,

Nor do I feel fear,
When my heart is sheared,

This man inside me has drown,
In the vast pool of logic that is around,

No longer, I live for desires,
Or for goals and dreams,

I function today,
Without tomorrow’s concern,

I have become the machine,
Fleeing the busted humanity.


© Copyright 2003 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
SgtMac
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since 2003-05-19
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1 posted 2003-05-20 05:08 PM


Thanks for the input.  
BrokenDreams
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since 2003-02-09
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In The Clouds
2 posted 2003-05-21 10:36 PM


hey, I've often felt like this myself. Good write, thanks for the read.
Jenni

Every oak tree started out as a couple of nuts who stood their
ground. --Anonymous

Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
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3 posted 2003-05-21 11:13 PM


You have captured a place I am familiar with. Well done.

Marilyn.

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