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ffpercent243
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0 posted 2003-05-11 09:32 PM



As she held

Her still-born child

In the middle of a dream,

She held back the tears

So as not to disturb

That beautiful dead face.

© Copyright 2003 Terence Cuthbert - All Rights Reserved
MellonCollie
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1 posted 2003-05-12 04:24 PM


that one is really sad...great one

how will i laugh tomorrow
when i can't even smile today

princessdani3122
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2 posted 2003-05-14 08:31 PM


I think I can only say ... It made me feel.
Marilyn
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3 posted 2003-05-16 02:25 PM


Such feeling in few words.

Marilyn.

ffpercent243
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4 posted 2003-05-16 07:47 PM


Based on words that Mrs Robbins had told me when at last she could speak of the event.

(Though actually the names have been changed so as not to cause upset.)

If I am silent, it is because I am thinking, if I do not talk, please do not think I am rude.

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