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ffpercent243
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0 posted 2003-05-10 07:40 PM




Also near the end of its life:
The old blackbird looks up at me
As if to say
"Please do not hurt me."


I feed it some bread,
And in the garden we sit together,
Both waiting for the same thing.


I, with a broken mind;
It, with a broken wing.


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wings of the moon
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1 posted 2003-05-11 04:35 AM


nicely put, I like the broken wing, broken mind comparison...
a very touching, original write...


love,
claire x

"more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you"

dani
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2 posted 2003-05-11 11:08 AM


we're living in a broken world
qtpieelmo
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3 posted 2003-05-11 12:16 PM


Awe, the last lines are truly touching!! I loved this one!!


ELMO

"No man is EVER worth my tears, and the one who is, will never make me cry!"

ffpercent243
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4 posted 2003-05-11 03:24 PM


Thank You
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