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teenpoet
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since 2001-10-17
Posts 280
Michigan

0 posted 2003-05-06 02:01 PM


snaking
crawling
ripping
tearing
clawing
wrenching
knotting
twisting
coiling
dying

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MellonCollie
Member
since 2003-04-11
Posts 117
Austria,Europe
1 posted 2003-05-11 06:17 PM


that's an interesting one, i like it, says alot without many words...keep it up
P.S. What's the blue phoenix-stuff about???

how will i laugh tomorrow
when i can't even smile today

ffpercent243
Junior Member
since 2003-05-04
Posts 37
United Kingdom
2 posted 2003-05-11 09:24 PM


Ah, I am nearly at the dying part, done all of the others, one by one, failed at them all.
Yitzy
Junior Member
since 2003-05-12
Posts 30

3 posted 2003-05-12 09:59 PM


I noticed the concrete image of a down arrow within the body of the list of present participles that serve to vent your feelings. We all feel like that at times.
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