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qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

0 posted 2003-05-03 02:36 PM


CLINGING TO YOUTH

Clinging to youth,
as the last strings fall away.
Stuck somewhere in the middle,
though wanting to hang back and stay.
Like a VCR forwarding fast.
Pause, slow motion, rewind,
not quite as easy to make it last.
Why can't we go back,
to when life was simple?
When a day felt like a week,
when we'd get up real early,
and leap to our feet.
When we had time to stop and laugh,
to smell a flower,
or watch some ants march past.
We're now too busy rushing,
getting into a crash,
where life may be taken,
in an instant, a flash.
So take your time now,
savor scenery as you drive by.
Don't forget to laugh,
and never be afraid to cry.
Don't lose the child at heart,
live as free as you please.
Go crazy, get silly,
hug all the trees!!


ELMO


"No man is EVER worth my tears, and the one who is, will never make me cry!"

[This message has been edited by qtpieelmo (05-03-2003 02:41 PM).]

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RavenEye
Junior Member
since 2003-05-02
Posts 29
Ohio, USA
1 posted 2003-05-03 05:55 PM


Hello,
What a gem of a poem! Great flow. Please keep sharing. Much peace to you!

Bye,
RavenEye

Keep faith, hold your dreams in your palm of your hand as you reach for your goals!

qtpieelmo
Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
2 posted 2003-05-03 06:39 PM


Yea thanx Raven, this is one of my less darker ones--lol!!


ELMO

"No man is EVER worth my tears, and the one who is, will never make me cry!"

ljossberir
Member
since 2003-05-04
Posts 81
Ny, USA
3 posted 2003-05-04 05:16 AM


nice one elmo, I love the big turn in attitude towards the last quarter... unexpected, and pleasent.
-matt

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