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mysticpoe
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0 posted 2003-04-29 01:47 PM


From the withering
and into the night
the crossing
began, with tones
of olive scented hills
a belonging as such
who
would dismay, of the sight
they have seen
the truth now wanders
the seeds
and the World, to be - -

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Brad Majors
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1 posted 2003-04-29 02:18 PM


brilliantly done
mysticpoe
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2 posted 2003-04-29 06:23 PM


Thanks Brad, from what I have read of your comments and your poetry. You seem to have an affinity for the abstract and what is real. As to be drawn by the communication of such for those who allow it to be seen.

Thanks for stopping by and it's good to here from you again.

mysticpoe

littlewing
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3 posted 2003-08-24 11:13 AM


For some odd reason, this reminded me of the Old Testament . . . before the parting of the Red Sea
brilliant mind you have there
xxoo

mysticpoe
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4 posted 2003-08-24 02:27 PM


Thanks again littlewing and thanks for the revival.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

eor
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blues & greys
5 posted 2003-08-25 12:06 PM


Plant them for me please...

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

inkedgoddess
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6 posted 2003-08-25 10:28 PM


the feel of continuance and recycyling all in this,good work
mysticpoe
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7 posted 2003-08-26 08:15 AM


eor, thanks again as always.

inkedgoddess, thanks for stopping by, appreciate.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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